If you have read even a few posts on this blog, you'll know by now that I am a rabid fan of BBC television, especially Doctor Who and Sherlock. When I fall for something, I fall hard. I think about it all day. I dream about it all night. I lose friends over it. I talk about it all the time, with anybody who will listen, and some people who won't.
So I made sure to watch the Doctor Who 50th anniversary show and the Christmas special,
and Sherlock's Season 3, as soon as possible and in some cases even sooner (thanks to the slightly nefarious actions of some tech-savvy friends).
Please DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER UNLESS YOU ARE ALL CAUGHT UP on both shows, as this post contains MAJOR SPOILERS.
First of all, let me assert that I love these new episodes. I laughed and cried with the rest of you. I had tons of fun. They are probably way above all other television out there (but since I don't watch much other television, I wouldn't know).
But they don't measure up to their own standard. In my opinion, these latest installments were much poorer art than preceding material. I've already discussed this with several friends over on facebook, so thanks to those I am be plagiarizing!
Here are some reasons:
1. They were cobbled together from bits of fan-food. I'm
not arguing for a general rule that fan-fiction is a poor genre or that art is made bad because of
fan input; not at all. As The Tolkien Professor points out in his latest Riddles in the Dark episode, some of the greatest works of literature in the history of the world have been fan fiction, such as Virgil's Aeneid and most of Shakespeare's plays! However, I am arguing that in these two cases, the art has been
made worse by the ways in which fan input has been tacked on. Whatever fans were clamoring for, we got it.
They've gotten away from really good story-telling and instead are
feeding us sound bites (and picture bites) of snacky stuff. The story reads as if it were a collage of blog posts by fans over the last year.
You
want to
see Benedict kiss somebody? OK. You want to see him shirtless? OK (even
though he's super scrawny and the color of a dead fish). You want to see your favorite villain back, even though he's dead? OK. Death, no, not a problem here.
You want more
regenerations? OK. You want James Bond-style action? OK. You want lots
of Doctors together regardless of what nonsense ensues? OK. And so on.
2. They contained very cliched material, poorly integrated into the fabric of the plot.
The James Bond sequence of riding the motorcycle and pulling
John out of the fire in Sherlock 3.1 is one of the worst examples of this. Even worse again was the scene lifted straight from V for Vendetta:
the Guy Fawkes lets-blow-up-parliament-with-a-subway-carriage sequence. That was poor writing, unoriginal, and poorly integrated with the rest of the story.
But what I object to most of all is:
3. The internal rules of the imaginary worlds are broken.
Here is an example
from earlier in Doctor Who series 7. In "The Doctor, the Widow, and the Wardrobe," the exact same
thing happens that had happened in "Father's
Day"--going back in time and doing something so the father
doesn't die--with no bad consequences, although previously it caused the end of the human race and the universe being
ripped apart!
Here is the biggest offense in Sherlock: Bringing back Moriarty. Now we have no parameters for
judging reality in the show. Faking Sherlock's death was one thing.
Faking everybody else's randomly is unfair according to the rules of the
visual medium's game.
One rule is that SHERLOCK ALWAYS WINS.
It's essential to the story (and to its morality, I could argue) that
Sherlock is always one step ahead of Moriarty. Let me expound.
I
don't know whether Sherlock was actually fooled by the rhythm from
Bach's partita, and I do think that Moriarty's
suicide came as a shock to him. So Sherlock does not always need to be
ahead of his enemies on every point.
However, the main rule of the show
is that Sherlock will always win in the end. Think of the woman:
"Everything I said--it was just a game." "And this is just losing." So
no matter how many times and in how many ways Moriarty fooled Sherlock
along the way, Sherlock was ahead of him on the biggest point, on the
only point that really mattered: He figured out long ahead of time that
his death would be required, so he figured out how to fake it. If it
turns out that Moriarty did the same, well then, the #1 rule is broken:
Sherlock did not win.
If,
however, it turns out that Sherlock and Moriarty planned their two fake
deaths together (because SH knew he would need JM as a reason to come
home and to keep the game going) then that just puts the whole show onto
a different plane, with a different tone, maybe even a different genre,
and would have serious moral consequences.
Two
faked deaths would also have another serious (and, I would argue, bad)
consequence. It would mean that we, the viewers, could not believe our
eyes. And that's what we've got in a visual medium: Our eyes. Thus, the second rule is that we have to be able to believe what we see.
If we see
someone put a gun into his mouth and pull the trigger, then we see the
resulting fall and pool of blood, that is evidence of his death. True, we
didn't see the wound, the hole: that would be too graphic for this
genre, for television. I wouldn't want to see that. Yet we were given
full visual evidence within the parameters, that JM was really dead. If
he isn't, then we no longer have a standard for judging reality. We no
longer had any foundation on which to stand. We didn't even see any
blood with Magnussen's death; we just heard the shot and saw him fall.
So maybe he's not dead either? Maybe nobody dies, ever. Maybe they get
regenerated.
Of course, we can always be fooled within the visual medium as long as the pieces tie together and other, more reliable evidence is given. For example: the viewer can be shown a dream, daydream, fantasy, hallucination, or memory -- but some visual or textual evidence always puts that into its context. We might see the hallucination disappear into the character's eye, or text might read "Three days earlier...." If we are given conflicting evidence, as in Inception, that is part of the genre, part of the particularity of that individual work.
Sherlock needs to operate within a framework of realism in a way that Doctor Who doesn't. Otherwise, the science of deduction is useless.
What I am talking about is a kind of cheating within the genre that drives me crazy: Like a
murder mystery that reveals at the end that the murderer wasn't among
the suspects all along, but was a stranger only introduced after his
identity as murderer has been revealed. That's not fair.
Though each day may be dull or stormy, works of art are islands of joy. Nature and poetry evoke "Sehnsucht," that longing for Heaven C.S. Lewis described. Here we spend a few minutes enjoying those islands, those moments in the sun.
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04 February 2014
05 July 2013
The Doctor Diaries III.11, 12, & 13
This three-episode story
is almost too beautiful, and too sad, to write about. I love how each
season works its way towards a multi-episode climax, as if the
writers and actors are saving up their energy and their ingenuity to
make sure they end well. Each ending-story is kind of a summary of
all the themes that have preceded in that season, as well as the
emotional high point of the season
Similarly,
this three-episode story summarizes all the themes I've been blogging
about in this series, and raises the theological and emotional stakes
of all those experiences
The
Shape of the Story
I
wrote about how all stories follow a narrative
arc, and that the size of each part of that arc changes
with the length of the story (number of pages or minutes). Each of
these three episodes has its own shape, and then the three-episode
story has a larger shape of its own. “Utopia” and “The Sound of
Drums” each follows only an upward trajectory: those each end on a
“cliff-hanger,” a crisis, without a following resolution. This
means that the overall story goes up and up and up, with three peaks,
three moments of crisis, and only one resolution. There are
mini-crises, too, when the character or the audience think a disaster
is impending, or when a disaster actually happens. So the
three-episode story form is an excellent shape to use for ramping up
tension. Within the story, it corresponds to just how awful things
are: the very family Martha loves has betrayed her, then been
captured and endangered in turn; the one person who promised to take
care of the human race has betrayed them; and the one person who
could be a real friend and companion to the Doctor has betrayed him.
Each horror is big enough that it deserves, and receives, its own
narrative high point.
But
then the length of the three episodes allows for a good resolution,
too. All that tension needs to be diffused, and it is, in the
glorious, magical, Peter-Pan-style ending.
I
Am You
I
wrote about the tradition in comic books,
superhero stories, and epics, for the
antagonist and protagonist to be paired in an equal-but-opposite
relationship:
the bad guy is a foil for the good guy.
Sometimes this is expressed in the chemistry between the two, which
gives the feeling that if they weren't enemies, they'd be best
friends. Sometimes each is delighted to find a worthy enemy.
Sometimes their hatred runs deeper than any fellow-feeling and each
is the exact polar opposite of the other. Some versions of this
paring may be found in:
Batman
vs. the Joker
Luke
Skywalker vs. Darth Vader/Anakin Skywalker
David
Dunn vs. Mr. Glass in Unbreakable
Indiana
Jones vs. Rene Belloq
Kirk/Spock
vs. Khan
Harry
Potter vs. Voldemort/Tom Riddle
Eragon
vs. Murtagh in the Inheritance Cycle
Cockatrice
vs. Chauntecleer in The
Book Of The Dun Cow
Picard
vs. Shinzon in Star
Trek Nemesis
Gandalf
vs. Saruman (or more generally, the Wise vs. Sauron, Morgoth, and
Ungoliant)
Ransom
vs. Weston in Perelandra
Sherlock
vs. Moriarty
This
theme is very strongly developed in the “Last of the Time Lords”
story, because the Doctor has finally found an equal. The Master is
just like him: a Time Lord from Gallifry, a time-and-space traveler
who can regenerate, a brilliant scientist and engineer who can fly
the TARDIS, someone who shares his past and his memories and
experiences: someone who should be his best friend. If they joined
together, they could multiple exponentially the good that the Doctor
does alone.
And
there is the final temptation scene that almost always happens in
these kinds of stories: “Turn to the Dark Side, Luke!” – but it
is in reverse. The Doctor begs the Master to regenerate, to join him,
to turn to the side of Good and join him. He won't, and his loss is
as heartbreaking as the loss of a family member.
This
seems to be a biblical principle: there is no criminal so bad that I
do not resemble him. And there is no criminal so lost that I should
wish for his destruction rather than his redemption.
The
Doctor is Jesus
On
that note, I have written about literary
christology throughout Doctor Who.
I don't think I need to say much here; it's so obvious, and so well
developed, in this story. Two quotes stand out for me in relation to
this theme:
There's
another biblical parallel going on in “The Sound of Drums” and
“The Last of the Time Lords.” Martha leaves, and the viewer is
horrified: Where is she going? What is she doing? How can she leave
the Doctor and her family for a year? When she returns, she claims to
have been seeking out the components for the one gun that will kill
the Master. When I first heard that, I was kind of horrified, kind of
skeptical. The Doctor wouldn't ask her to do that, would he?
“I
didn't come here to kill him; I came here to save him”
and
“You
know what happens now....You wouldn't listen... Because you know what
I'm going to say....I forgive you.”
I
don't think any commentary is required!
It's
The Story that Saves

And of
course, he didn't. So what was she doing?
She was
telling a story. Just telling his story:
I travelled across the world. From the ruins of New York, to the fusion mills of China, right across the radiation pits of Europe. And everywhere I went I saw people just like you, living as slaves! But if Martha Jones became a legend then that's wrong, because my name isn't important. There's someone else. The man who sent me out there, the man who told me to walk the Earth. And his name is The Doctor. He has saved your lives so many times and you never even knew he was there. He never stops. He never stays. He never asks to be thanked. But I've seen him, I know him... I love him... And I know what he can do.
What a
wonderful way for that season to end.
Now, further up and further in!
04 July 2013
The Doctor Diaries III.10c:
“Blink” and you'll miss it
As
if I haven't written enough about “Blink,” here's one final go.
It's such a good episode, it deserves all this attention, I think. I
want to touch on one more topic.
You
know the saying “Blink and you'll miss it”? Well, as the writers
of Doctor
Who
so often do, they took the concept behind this phrase and literalized
it into plot and characters.
In
the story, if you blink while looking at a Weeping Angel, you will be
taken out of your proper timeline and put into another: wrenched from
your life, your loved ones, your possessions, your ambitions, and
your work. In Billy's case, his life was put back just so far that he
could then see, after opening his eyes from the blink, what he had
missed. He was 40 years away, and could glimpse the life he should
have had.
In
our lives, doesn't think happen? We “blink” and find we've missed
something huge.
We've
stopped paying attention, and children have grown up and we've missed
their childhoods.
We've
looked away, and found a marriage or a friendship has died from lack
of care.
We've
gotten busy, blinked, and suddenly discovered we're too old to have
kids, or to go back to school, or to run a marathon, or to learn how
to dance, or to climb a mountain.
We
blink, and we're on our deathbed, never having repented, though we
meant to, we meant to, we meant to change and live a good life and
love God and others.
But
we blinked.
03 July 2013
The Doctor Diaries III.10b: “Blink”
The Trouble with Time-Stories
C.S. Lewis has ruined Doctor Who for me. Well, not really, obviously. But Lewis made one simple statement about time travel once that has spoiled ever other time-travel story I've encountered ever since. So I'm going to share that with you, then talk about a couple of time-travel stories and their problems.
The Dark Tower and the Problem of Bodies
Even if you are a super C.S. Lewis fan, you may not have read The Dark Tower. It is a fragment, just the first few chapters of a projected novel. [There is an interesting controversy about this novel]. I do recommend reading it; I love it and am distressed that CSL didn't finish it. If he had, it would have been a powerful part of his extended Ransom cycle, along with Out of the Silent Planet, Perelandra, That Hideous Strength, and The Screwtape Letters. In fact, if Tolkien had finished The Fall of Arthur, all of CSL's Ransom books and everything Tolkien every wrote and all of Charles Williams' Arthurian poetry could have been mapped on to one another in a massive multi-layered totalizing mythology. But that's a totally different topic!
Anyway, The Dark Tower is a creepy story about a scientist who has invented a "chronoscope" with which he can watch some other time period. He doesn't know what time period it he is watching, whether past or future, and as the story progresses, the characters watching this time unfold start to suspect it's more like a parallel time, or the same time in a parallel universe, or perhaps even a glimpse into Hell. The action heats up when two characters are apparently exchanged between Othertime and our time, with a wild chase ensuing. It breaks off in the middle of a sentence, just as things are getting exciting. The best bit, from a literary-philosophical-science [fiction] point of view is this discussion (which I was delighted to find already transcribed here):
There are, of course, many other problems with time travel.
The Blue Yonder and The Problem of Infinite Recurrence
One problem is the simple fact that if you went back in time and changed something, well then, it was changed in the past, so it would always have been that way. There would be nothing for you to change.
Nearly any time-travel movie or show would work as an example. I'm going to use The Blue Yonder, one I remember vividly from childhood. In this film, a little boy grows up knowing that his grandfather had died while attempting to make it across the Atlantic in a solo flight. Then the boy finds a time machine, goes back in time, and changes the past so his grandfather makes it.
Here's the difficulty. If the boy had done that, then since it was in the past, his grandfather would always already have made it, and the boy wouldn't know any differently—so then he wouldn't go back into the past to make that change, which means it wouldn't have been made, and he would have to go back, and we've got ourselves stuck in a strange loop.
Another big problem has to do with the way in which time-travel stories are told.
Harry Potter and The Trouble with Narrative
Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban is the perfect example of this problem. Here's how it goes.
It is important to understand that there are two passes in the narrative: two trips, as it were, through the same period of time, the same three hours one evening. (Watch this great split-screen presentation):
Narrative #1. Harry, Ron, and Hermione go to Hagrid's hut to console him over the upcoming execution of Buckbeak the hippogriff. Events unfold all the way until the moment Harry and Sirius are about to have their souls sucked out by dementors, when Harry sees a young man across the lake. This person sends out a stag patronus, which scatters the dementors and saves Harry.
Narrative #2. This is the second pass. Keep in mind that this is the same three hours as described in #1 above. It is another narrative—another story told to the reader/viewer, but it is the same set of minutes that the characters are passing through in linear fashion, 4:00, 4:01, 4:02, etc. Harry and Hermione go back in time, conveniently acquiring a second set of bodies in complete defiance of C.S. Lewis' principle described above. But they travel a different path physically, though it is the same path in time. Events unfold again, the same events, just seen from a different perspective, until Harry and Sirius are about to have their souls sucked out by dementors. This time, Harry is on the other side of the lake, waiting for the young man he thinks was his father. At the last minute (at the same minute as in the sequence before), he realizes he saw himself, so he sends out the stag patronus.
Now, here's the problem with the unfolding of the same narrative twice, or two narratives in one time period. In order for that to work—for Harry to mistake himself for his father—he had to have traveled through story #1 FIRST, then through story #2 (the same way in which the reader/viewer encountered those stories)—but it's time travel, so the two stories happened at the same time. There was no first story and second story—that's only a convention of story-telling, not a chronological reality. Harry could just as well have gone through the second story first, but really he went through both at the same time, so he would have known the figure with the stag patronus was himself, not his father, because, well, because it was himself and he was doing those actions at the same time.
I was of Two Minds
There is, of course, another enormous problem there with both the narrative and the bodies: what about the mind? If you somehow magically got an extra body to run around in the past with, watching your other self, what about your consciousness?
In Harry Potter, the reader is led to assume that time-travel creates two consciousnesses, one for each body (the “past” body that is going through its timeline naturally, and the “present” body that is going through its past timeline by unnatural means). But then these two consciousnesses are unaware of one another. Even supposing, for the sake of the fantasy, that time travel did create two bodies (and thus two consciousnesses), why does that then mean that the two consciousnesses would be unaware of one another? Why would they not be in communication? And why would their memories be different? The “past” body contains a consciousness with a memory up to its current moment on its natural timeline, while the “present” body that has traveled back contains a memory up to the moment that it left its natural timeline. Why wouldn't traveling back in time erase the memories back to that previous point? Or why wouldn't traveling into the future dump “future memories” into the consciousness of the traveling body? Or why wouldn't traveling either direction give unlived memories to the non-traveling body?
Well, again, simply because of narrative. Simply so that the story works, so that the story can be told.
“Blink” and the Causeless Circle
Now, “Blink” is one of the better time-travel stories I've come across, and one of the best episodes in all of Doctor Who from that point of view. But there are some problems.
First, the Angels chucked Billy back in 1969 so that they could consume the life-energy he would have had if he had kept living out his years naturally. So, there's just random extra life-energy waiting for him in 1969? That doesn't make sense.
And there's another problem that's actually a beautiful one: it's really quite a lovely philosophical conundrum rather than a flaw in the story. Let's see if I can express it—this is a tough one. Here goes.
Sally reads warnings that the Doctor left for her on the wall. He traveled back in time from the future to leave those warnings. He knew she would be there at that time and place because he had the advantage of the future, so he could “look back” and warn her. OK, so far so good. Same thing with the letter from her friend Kathy.
But then there's the whole bit with the dvds and the transcript. I wonder if I can do this, talk through it – it's quite difficult! Here goes.
- Billy got kicked back into 1969.
- He sat down with the Doctor and recorded the Doctor reading that transcript.
- Sally watched the dvd and had a conversation with the Doctor.
- Larry transcribed the conversation.
- Sally met the Doctor and gave him the transcript in 2007.
- The Doctor got chucked back to 1969 where he met Billy and recorded the conversation.
Did I get that right?
OK, so you see how neatly that loop avoids the problem created in The Blue Yonder. It's not a strange loop, because Sally didn't change anything. Nobody changed anything. Instead, they acted out a series of events that would have gone otherwise if they hadn't had information that relied on time travel for its transmission. Very good, Moffat!
The problem of bodies is averted: each person's one body is taken from a time period and put into another. There aren't two bodies. (Of course there are in other episodes, in which the Doctor meets himself, or Rose or Amy meets her younger self). Sally stays in her time period, and Kathy's and Billy's bodies move from one era to another without leaving a body behind. (Of course, that doesn't answer the question of where they got the molecules to make up a body in that period, though). Decent job, Moffat.
They don't have two minds, then, either: as a matter of fact, the way the story works depends upon the limited knowledge of a single, time-bound consciousness for Sally, and a single, time-moveable consciousness for the Doctor. Nice work, Moffat.
So then, what's the problem? Well, it's that the events in “Blink” constitute a nice chain of cause-and-effect, but that the final effect is the cause of the first cause.
Aristotle would not approve. Or would he?
Aristotle wrote about how every effect must have a cause, and that this is one way to go about pondering God's existence. In this kind of reasoning, God would be the ultimate Cause of all things: He would be the one who got everything going. He started the first effect, which caused the next effect, and so on. He is the Unmoved Mover who got everything else moving.
In “Blink,” there is no Unmoved Mover. The last mover moves the first mover in a circle. It is not an endless circle, however: it went around once. And that's where I have a problem. Wouldn't it either have to go around infinitely, happening over and over again, or else have an outside force breaking in at some point along the circle to get it rolling?
So you see what I meant when I said this is a lovely philosophical conundrum rather than a flaw in the story. It's more a question about how things—time, events, causation—work, rather than an action plot that uses time travel as a cheap device. Brilliant work, Moffat.
C.S. Lewis has ruined Doctor Who for me. Well, not really, obviously. But Lewis made one simple statement about time travel once that has spoiled ever other time-travel story I've encountered ever since. So I'm going to share that with you, then talk about a couple of time-travel stories and their problems.
The Dark Tower and the Problem of Bodies

Anyway, The Dark Tower is a creepy story about a scientist who has invented a "chronoscope" with which he can watch some other time period. He doesn't know what time period it he is watching, whether past or future, and as the story progresses, the characters watching this time unfold start to suspect it's more like a parallel time, or the same time in a parallel universe, or perhaps even a glimpse into Hell. The action heats up when two characters are apparently exchanged between Othertime and our time, with a wild chase ensuing. It breaks off in the middle of a sentence, just as things are getting exciting. The best bit, from a literary-philosophical-science [fiction] point of view is this discussion (which I was delighted to find already transcribed here):
“Of course,” said Orfieu, “the sort of timetravelling you read about in books -- time-travelling in the body -- is absolutely impossible.” ...And that has ruined it for me. Right there. With his usual clean cuts, CSL has sliced open the heart of time-travel fiction and revealed its emptiness. Really, I can't see any way out of that difficulty. Can you?
“Absolutely impossible?” said Ransom. “Why?”
“I bet you see,” said Orfieu, glancing towards MacPhee.
“Go on, go on,” said the Scot with the air of one refusing to interrupt children at their play. We all echoed him.
“Well,: said Orfieu, “time-travelling clearly means going into the future or the past. Now where will the particles that compose your body be five hundred years hence? They'll be all over the place -- some in the earth, some in plants and animals, and some in the bodies of your descendents, if you have any. Thus, to go to the year 3000 AD means going to a time at which your body doesn't exist; and that means according to one hypothesis, becoming nothing, and, according to the other, becoming a disembodied spirit.”
“But half a moment,” said I, rather foolishly, “you don't need to find a body waiting for you in the year 3000. You would take your present body with you.”
“But don't you see that's just what you can't do?” said Orfieu. “All the matter which makes up your body now will be being used for different purposes in 3000.”
I still gaped.
“Look here,” he said. “You will grant me that the same piece of matter can't be in two different places at the same time. Very well. Now, suppose that the particles which at present make up the tip of your nose by the year 3000 form part of a chair. If you could travel to the year 3000 and, as you suggest, take your present body with you, that would mean that at some moment in 3000 the very same particles would have to be both in your nose and in the chair -- which is absurd.”
There are, of course, many other problems with time travel.
The Blue Yonder and The Problem of Infinite Recurrence
One problem is the simple fact that if you went back in time and changed something, well then, it was changed in the past, so it would always have been that way. There would be nothing for you to change.

Here's the difficulty. If the boy had done that, then since it was in the past, his grandfather would always already have made it, and the boy wouldn't know any differently—so then he wouldn't go back into the past to make that change, which means it wouldn't have been made, and he would have to go back, and we've got ourselves stuck in a strange loop.
Another big problem has to do with the way in which time-travel stories are told.
Harry Potter and The Trouble with Narrative
Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban is the perfect example of this problem. Here's how it goes.
It is important to understand that there are two passes in the narrative: two trips, as it were, through the same period of time, the same three hours one evening. (Watch this great split-screen presentation):
Narrative #1. Harry, Ron, and Hermione go to Hagrid's hut to console him over the upcoming execution of Buckbeak the hippogriff. Events unfold all the way until the moment Harry and Sirius are about to have their souls sucked out by dementors, when Harry sees a young man across the lake. This person sends out a stag patronus, which scatters the dementors and saves Harry.
Narrative #2. This is the second pass. Keep in mind that this is the same three hours as described in #1 above. It is another narrative—another story told to the reader/viewer, but it is the same set of minutes that the characters are passing through in linear fashion, 4:00, 4:01, 4:02, etc. Harry and Hermione go back in time, conveniently acquiring a second set of bodies in complete defiance of C.S. Lewis' principle described above. But they travel a different path physically, though it is the same path in time. Events unfold again, the same events, just seen from a different perspective, until Harry and Sirius are about to have their souls sucked out by dementors. This time, Harry is on the other side of the lake, waiting for the young man he thinks was his father. At the last minute (at the same minute as in the sequence before), he realizes he saw himself, so he sends out the stag patronus.
Now, here's the problem with the unfolding of the same narrative twice, or two narratives in one time period. In order for that to work—for Harry to mistake himself for his father—he had to have traveled through story #1 FIRST, then through story #2 (the same way in which the reader/viewer encountered those stories)—but it's time travel, so the two stories happened at the same time. There was no first story and second story—that's only a convention of story-telling, not a chronological reality. Harry could just as well have gone through the second story first, but really he went through both at the same time, so he would have known the figure with the stag patronus was himself, not his father, because, well, because it was himself and he was doing those actions at the same time.
I was of Two Minds
There is, of course, another enormous problem there with both the narrative and the bodies: what about the mind? If you somehow magically got an extra body to run around in the past with, watching your other self, what about your consciousness?

Well, again, simply because of narrative. Simply so that the story works, so that the story can be told.
“Blink” and the Causeless Circle
Now, “Blink” is one of the better time-travel stories I've come across, and one of the best episodes in all of Doctor Who from that point of view. But there are some problems.
First, the Angels chucked Billy back in 1969 so that they could consume the life-energy he would have had if he had kept living out his years naturally. So, there's just random extra life-energy waiting for him in 1969? That doesn't make sense.
And there's another problem that's actually a beautiful one: it's really quite a lovely philosophical conundrum rather than a flaw in the story. Let's see if I can express it—this is a tough one. Here goes.
Sally reads warnings that the Doctor left for her on the wall. He traveled back in time from the future to leave those warnings. He knew she would be there at that time and place because he had the advantage of the future, so he could “look back” and warn her. OK, so far so good. Same thing with the letter from her friend Kathy.
But then there's the whole bit with the dvds and the transcript. I wonder if I can do this, talk through it – it's quite difficult! Here goes.
- Billy got kicked back into 1969.
- He sat down with the Doctor and recorded the Doctor reading that transcript.
- Sally watched the dvd and had a conversation with the Doctor.
- Larry transcribed the conversation.
- Sally met the Doctor and gave him the transcript in 2007.
- The Doctor got chucked back to 1969 where he met Billy and recorded the conversation.
Did I get that right?
OK, so you see how neatly that loop avoids the problem created in The Blue Yonder. It's not a strange loop, because Sally didn't change anything. Nobody changed anything. Instead, they acted out a series of events that would have gone otherwise if they hadn't had information that relied on time travel for its transmission. Very good, Moffat!
The problem of bodies is averted: each person's one body is taken from a time period and put into another. There aren't two bodies. (Of course there are in other episodes, in which the Doctor meets himself, or Rose or Amy meets her younger self). Sally stays in her time period, and Kathy's and Billy's bodies move from one era to another without leaving a body behind. (Of course, that doesn't answer the question of where they got the molecules to make up a body in that period, though). Decent job, Moffat.
They don't have two minds, then, either: as a matter of fact, the way the story works depends upon the limited knowledge of a single, time-bound consciousness for Sally, and a single, time-moveable consciousness for the Doctor. Nice work, Moffat.
So then, what's the problem? Well, it's that the events in “Blink” constitute a nice chain of cause-and-effect, but that the final effect is the cause of the first cause.
Aristotle would not approve. Or would he?
Aristotle wrote about how every effect must have a cause, and that this is one way to go about pondering God's existence. In this kind of reasoning, God would be the ultimate Cause of all things: He would be the one who got everything going. He started the first effect, which caused the next effect, and so on. He is the Unmoved Mover who got everything else moving.
In “Blink,” there is no Unmoved Mover. The last mover moves the first mover in a circle. It is not an endless circle, however: it went around once. And that's where I have a problem. Wouldn't it either have to go around infinitely, happening over and over again, or else have an outside force breaking in at some point along the circle to get it rolling?
So you see what I meant when I said this is a lovely philosophical conundrum rather than a flaw in the story. It's more a question about how things—time, events, causation—work, rather than an action plot that uses time travel as a cheap device. Brilliant work, Moffat.
02 July 2013
The Doctor Diaries III.10a: “Blink”
The Best Episode?
“Blink” is the favorite episode of many connoisseurs. It is really a perfect episode: perhaps the quintessential single piece of Doctor Who. If you had to pick just one episode to watch, ever, or a first episode as an introduction for a new viewer, this might be the one.
Its narrative perspective is great as an introduction to the Doctor, because [nearly] the whole episode is from the point of view of someone who knows nothing about him, and who is justifiably confused by the strange events in which she is involved. Sally Sparrow is a sweet, loveable, beautiful person, too (played by the charming and talented Carey Mulligan, more recently of The Great Gatsby fame): someone whose narrative position we are happy to inhabit.
The dramatis personae is stocked with delightful characters: Billy Shipton, Larry Nightingale, and Kathy Nightingale are all tons of fun, just a little bit cooler than people you know. Again, they provide a way into the story: they are like us, or like what we want to be, or like our friends, or like how we imagine our friends to be. This takes us into the plot so that we get wrapped up into it.
Its story-arc is ideal: It is contained within one 45-minute episode, but it has a long, slow, carefully-developed exposition. For a very long time, it doesn't seem to have anything to do with the Doctor. This connects with the narrative position, as both Sally and the viewer gradually get to know about powerful, mysterious, dangerous forces at work in time and space, and about the one Person who can control them. But he cannot: he is trapped, and needs the help of ordinary little humans to set him free again. That is the conflict: can Sally help the Doctor escape from his time-trap without being destroyed in the process? {wow, that sounds like a cheesy back-of-the-box blurb. Sorry}.
And the tension ratchets up higher and higher, with a delicate handling of fear and creepiness not often matched in Doctor Who, which frequently relies on simple race-against-the-clock and race-against-death matches with superbly unsubtle monsters and disasters. This one takes a more sophisticated approach, with a slow, patient introduction to one of the worst enemies ever: the Weeping Angels.
Now, I had the misfortune of watching “The Time of Angels” and “Flesh and Stone” first, in my crazy backwards introduction to Doctor Who (remember I watched series 5, 2, 1, 3 in that order). I LOVE those two episodes. I think they are amazing. I do not mean to disparage them at all, as the writing and acting of those two Angel-episodes are superb. But since those angels are even more dangerous than these—those kill you, these chuck you back in time somewhere so they can consume your life-energy—and since Amy's terrifying encounter with them is drawn out and amped up, I found the Weeping Angels in “Blink” much less scary than I would have otherwise. Because, really, their terror is far greater, because so much more subtle and psychologically realistic. Amy meets them on another planet, in another time period, as just one more horrific enemy that wants to kill the Doctor in a long chain of horrific enemies who want to kill the Doctor. Sally meets them in her own time period, during her ordinary linear life, in a very creepy old abandoned house. Whereas Amy's encounter is (from her point of view) clearly science fiction she is caught up in, Sally's is a nightmare come to life.
Do you see what an enormous difference that is? Meeting terror in a foreign situation is pretty much expected; expected as a genre convention, and as part of life. We expect to meet monsters in a far-away jungle or on a far-away planet. But meeting something ordinary—a garden statue—in your ordinary life and having it turn out to be a monster? That is much, much worse.
Then, finally, there is the plot: the time-story. It may be the best and most convoluted time-story Moffat ever wrote. If you've seen the episode, you know it, so there's no sense my summarizing it: if you haven't, I won't spoil it here. But tomorrow's post will be about time-stories, using this one as a point of discussion, so I will spoil it there. So go and watch “Blink,” then come back tomorrow!
“Blink” is the favorite episode of many connoisseurs. It is really a perfect episode: perhaps the quintessential single piece of Doctor Who. If you had to pick just one episode to watch, ever, or a first episode as an introduction for a new viewer, this might be the one.
Its narrative perspective is great as an introduction to the Doctor, because [nearly] the whole episode is from the point of view of someone who knows nothing about him, and who is justifiably confused by the strange events in which she is involved. Sally Sparrow is a sweet, loveable, beautiful person, too (played by the charming and talented Carey Mulligan, more recently of The Great Gatsby fame): someone whose narrative position we are happy to inhabit.
The dramatis personae is stocked with delightful characters: Billy Shipton, Larry Nightingale, and Kathy Nightingale are all tons of fun, just a little bit cooler than people you know. Again, they provide a way into the story: they are like us, or like what we want to be, or like our friends, or like how we imagine our friends to be. This takes us into the plot so that we get wrapped up into it.
Its story-arc is ideal: It is contained within one 45-minute episode, but it has a long, slow, carefully-developed exposition. For a very long time, it doesn't seem to have anything to do with the Doctor. This connects with the narrative position, as both Sally and the viewer gradually get to know about powerful, mysterious, dangerous forces at work in time and space, and about the one Person who can control them. But he cannot: he is trapped, and needs the help of ordinary little humans to set him free again. That is the conflict: can Sally help the Doctor escape from his time-trap without being destroyed in the process? {wow, that sounds like a cheesy back-of-the-box blurb. Sorry}.
And the tension ratchets up higher and higher, with a delicate handling of fear and creepiness not often matched in Doctor Who, which frequently relies on simple race-against-the-clock and race-against-death matches with superbly unsubtle monsters and disasters. This one takes a more sophisticated approach, with a slow, patient introduction to one of the worst enemies ever: the Weeping Angels.
Now, I had the misfortune of watching “The Time of Angels” and “Flesh and Stone” first, in my crazy backwards introduction to Doctor Who (remember I watched series 5, 2, 1, 3 in that order). I LOVE those two episodes. I think they are amazing. I do not mean to disparage them at all, as the writing and acting of those two Angel-episodes are superb. But since those angels are even more dangerous than these—those kill you, these chuck you back in time somewhere so they can consume your life-energy—and since Amy's terrifying encounter with them is drawn out and amped up, I found the Weeping Angels in “Blink” much less scary than I would have otherwise. Because, really, their terror is far greater, because so much more subtle and psychologically realistic. Amy meets them on another planet, in another time period, as just one more horrific enemy that wants to kill the Doctor in a long chain of horrific enemies who want to kill the Doctor. Sally meets them in her own time period, during her ordinary linear life, in a very creepy old abandoned house. Whereas Amy's encounter is (from her point of view) clearly science fiction she is caught up in, Sally's is a nightmare come to life.
Do you see what an enormous difference that is? Meeting terror in a foreign situation is pretty much expected; expected as a genre convention, and as part of life. We expect to meet monsters in a far-away jungle or on a far-away planet. But meeting something ordinary—a garden statue—in your ordinary life and having it turn out to be a monster? That is much, much worse.
Then, finally, there is the plot: the time-story. It may be the best and most convoluted time-story Moffat ever wrote. If you've seen the episode, you know it, so there's no sense my summarizing it: if you haven't, I won't spoil it here. But tomorrow's post will be about time-stories, using this one as a point of discussion, so I will spoil it there. So go and watch “Blink,” then come back tomorrow!
29 June 2013
The Doctor Diaries III.8 & 9: “Human Nature” and “The Family of Blood”
Stories
About Stories
This
two-episode story is one of the tightest, best-written, and
best-acted I've seen so far. It's just packed with brilliant themes
and lots of heartbreak. I could write about the love story, the christological
themes, the historicist look at the first world war, or so
many other topics. I could rave about how these two episodes are a
showcase for Tennant's consummate acting skill. I could approach them
psychoanalytically, through the Doctor's dreams.
But
instead, I want to talk about Meta-Narrative
and
about The
Causes of Creepiness.
OK,
meta-narrative is not the right word for what I'm going to discuss. A
meta-narrative is a big story that explains everything: science,
religion, etc.
What
I'm thinking of is more like a sub-narrative: The
Journal of Impossible Things. This
is the diary John Smith keeps of his dreams, which are dreams of the
truth. There are many, many layers here: there is reality, which is
his past as the Doctor. There are revelatory dreams, in which he
dreams the truth but thinks it's fiction. There is the Journal
itself, in which he writes truth as if it is fiction. The Journal is
a beautiful artifact, and a beautiful plot device. With images and
text, it takes reality and pushes it into a fantasy realm (from the
Doctor's point of view), while simultaneously giving that disbelieved
reality a new plausibility (to Joan Redfern's point of view).
Then
there is the real-fiction of his life as John Smith, which is a real
life on earth in a certain place, at a certain time, with real
relationships with other people, but which is less real (in one
sense) than his true identity as The Doctor and more real (in another
sense) as a human existence. It is a real life, for a few months, in
which he falls in love with a woman in as serious a manner as man has
ever done. For her, this is all the reality: love and heartbreak.
Then
there is Martha, again filling in for the viewer, watching him with
all of her inside and outside knowledge: only she knows all the
stories.
The
second theme I want to pick up on is that of The
Causes of Creepiness.
The writers of Doctor
Who do
a brilliant job creating explanations
for creepy things. What creeps you out for no reason? Spiral
staircases? Gauzy window curtains moving in a evening breeze? Or
maybe angel statues, mirrors, or scarecrows? Whatever it is,
eventually an episode of Doctor
Who
will explain to you why those things are creepy—and will creep you
out permanently while doing so.
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